Reviews for ruined
Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
i love your phrases like "feather-weight gram of sanity." this is amazing
DailyLatte chapter 1 . 7/31/2005
Wow this is so touching. You are such an amazing writter and its an honor to be able to read your work. My favorite line is "so stitch me up with fairytale endings" Isn't that what everybody wants? Anyway, great work...

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blackoutroses chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
vulnerability shined through the words and every emotion was deeply felt.
fading zero chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
this is so beautiful,i love the way you wrote makes tons of sense to me,btw,thanks for your review
jaepoe chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
i loved the way you describe things in this poem, the imagery is amazing. the "smearing of the ashtray fingers". really well done
Relayer chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Creative imagery, very dark.
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
i spent a fortune to exorcise your ghost

love that line. And the ending. so much emotion in this, I just can't even describe it. Hauntingly beautiful. Brava.
Sweet Miseries chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
The metaphors, the imagery, the quality, I
poisonous chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Wow, that was awesome. The words are amazing..
and flowers chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
wow, you are the one with the great descriptions. "ashtray fingers" so stunning. great job, darling. thanks for all your reviews
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
as long as your there...you're

awesome job.. I LOVE that first stanza & the last 2 stanza.. awesome awesome poem
peaceman4ever chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
emotions are very powerful...soo cool
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
wow, i love the emotions you put into this Very heartfelt Great work!
Munchin chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Wow.. descriptive.. vicious.. fearful.. tired.. sad.. and much more. altogether an interesting story.
ambiguityy chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
powerful emotion - the bitterness and anger painted in words.
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