Reviews for Mind
Aithwayth chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
"just about to break the barrier of time between my soul and my mind for all time to be unseen...

Life was uncertain until the rays from the moon were reflecting its life force as a gift toward its mother..."

i really like this

"Can a mind create forces itself and hide them without a trace? ..."

very good question

"Feel how the water is cold while it flows down your body..."

I love this!

"Open the doors to your mind and release its powers and its secrets that will make us know everything beyond it limits...

Our minds created it"

We all need to do this...

"Look all around you and try to see what’s life really about..."

Some people are just afraid to.

This poem is awesome... very moving and makes you questions your motives in life.. I love it! Kudos!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
I loved your choice of "topic" and your writing is just incredible as well!
Ballerina with a Gun chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
Thanks so much for the review! I was in desperate need of them.

Anyway, I think your poem is beautiful. 'Touch the fire and see how hot it will be' - that line really got me for some reason.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
interesting.. ncie repition
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
I love this, how beautiful. Reminiscent of Whitman, how I enjoyed your gentle thoughts so immensely.
Biene chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
WOW! WOW! WOW! *on and on* I think this something original! DEFINETELY original!
hvk chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Thankee sai for the review. And it's my policy to review reviewers. SO...

Very nice and so deep, it can drown causual reviewers. Luckily, you have a fast and loose style that serves as a life preserver quitle nicely.

And if you like my stuff here, check out the link on my profile!
Broken Telephone chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
WOW! Beautiful job! Very powerful! Great great job!