Reviews for Fortuna |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I very much enjoy this story. I hope that you continue to be inspired by your muse and write more wonderful chapters. By far this is one of the best stories I have ever read. No lie. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please go on whit the story! I like it very much! Would that I could help you and give you any ideas but I'm not very good in story's so, sorry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the story, and no, it didn't seem like it ended there. The way you worded thigs made it seem like there was more. Anyway, youre summary and prophecy says more is coming. Its a good story good job. Fera |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story, its pretty cool how you have both characters hating each other and yet there is that hint of lust... please update as soon as you can...and if you need any ideas I can help...any ways keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() Wow! It is a really good story but it is kind of sad and depressing. I do so hope that that is not the ending of your story and if it is not I very much wish for you to continue in your telling of it. If this is not the end of your story then I look forward to reading more of it. Again please continue this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. Please continue? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your story so far, you should have something happen between them soon. Great job! -bre |
![]() ![]() tht was prety good start, but u need to add a little more detail. |