Reviews for The Soul Breaks At Noon
364 unbirthdays chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
This is a beautiful poem, and thanx for the review! (I joined in on laughing when I realized my mistake, haha) Thank you!
morbid-scribbles chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
I love the ending. Wonderful work!
I Am Faithless chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Ah, the angst queen strikes again1 i was just hitting the swing when you broke the spell with so harsh a line at the end, but then thats the point isn't it? to shock the reader back to reality with one well placed punch to the gut! Amazingly quickly woven to lull you into an immeadiate false sense of security and then the dream is lost like a wisp of smoke, short and much to the very sharp point!Faith