Reviews for The Thirteenth Hour Original
xvxRusted Hopexvx chapter 7 . 9/11/2005
Wow... Wow. This was written very well. It's excellent. I love it. The depth and the emotion poured into this story are overwhelming. I greatly enjoyed it. I was sad to see Rider die and I was sad that the story ended. In the end I don't know if I could have just let Xander go the way you portrayed Angel to do so. It's a story to make you think. Congratulations and keep up the good work. You are really talented!~Krysi
Timothy Hazelo chapter 7 . 9/9/2005
That was A GREAT ending!

Your an Amazing writer...

Keep it up!
miss-blackhair chapter 7 . 9/9/2005
omg...! yupp yupp... this is more satisfying to read..! you're a totally awesome writer. i wanna sae more but my mom's yelling at me for dinner.. lol
The Fourth Fate chapter 7 . 9/8/2005
WOW. OMG. It's finished. Omg. I wonder whatever did happen to Angel... Great ending. *Clap Clap Clap* WOW. Perfect. Perfect story. This is jsut so amazing I don't even know where to begin. The changing your future, the part about Angel's disappearence... The 4TH angel. WOw. Gonna go read the end of The Shattered Mirror. Can't wait to see how it ended! Ah! Bravo! This was outstanding!
The Fourth Fate chapter 6 . 9/2/2005
.G-D. OMG. SHE KILLED HIM! SHE KILLED HIM! Why wasn't he locked up! Did Nina commit suicide? How was she related to Xander?

I love playing with the idea of time travel... So funny. Angel kills Xander, seeing herself do it. This gets her all hyped up to kill him. But she never would have killed him if she hadn't seen herself do it. But she never would have seen it if she hadn't done it. And if she'd never done it, she'd never see it and WANT to kill him and WANT to taste revenge and WANT to take his life. So funny how that works. So funny.

WOW. Can't wait for the epilogue... Jeez. I love this story...

OMG! NO. I want to cry. I can't believe this! AH. NO. This is like unreal. I feel like I knew these people. SHe kills someone. After realizing what it's like to lose two people, she forces that grief upon someone else. So strange. So sad.

I can hardly bring myself to mention Angel's name. It makes me sad. I feel like I lost her when she stabbed him. Oh Xander. You moron. G-d! AH. Omg. I need to stop obsessing. *takes deep breaths*

Okay. *Deep breath* Excellent. *deep breath* I loved this story *deep breath* I'm sad it's over *starts to hyperventilate, but takes deep breath* And I can't wait for more. *Deep breath Deep breath Deep breath...*
The Fourth Fate chapter 5 . 9/2/2005
WOAH. I LOVE this story. Jesus. You know, I'm not sure I really liked Rider than much... But now that he's gone I'm so sad. Poor, poor Angel. Is the story really over soon? I hope not. I have a sinking suspision Angel will be the next to die. Am I just being morbid? I guess I'll have to read on to find out!
Timothy Hazelo chapter 6 . 9/2/2005

I really thought it was going to be Angel...So...I wonder what will happen to angel? Um

I really really thought it was going to be angel...




Thats what I least-Expected...

Good job!

Timothy HazeloTrue Beleiver of Xenu
Timothy Hazelo chapter 5 . 9/2/2005

I think I know who's going to die... O.O ... But I am not going to share my opinion until I know its going to happen... (Which means you have to do the last chapter very soon...)

Kay! Bye!

Timothy Hazelo,True Beleiver of Xenu
The Fourth Fate chapter 4 . 8/22/2005
Sucked? Are you insane! Hm. Interesting twists... I hate to share my intimate thoughts on this story, but because you have been to wonderfully open in your reviews...

So the foreshadowing about Lillian and going out...yada yada... Perhaps it was all leading to this? Yes. I think it was. So surreal though... Sorry I should explain my train of thought...

I was thinking, Rider professing his love in the dream, then in real life... But the real life part seemed so unreal... So hazy. So panicked. WOW. I love this story. If you don't update, I'll scream. Hahaha. Seriously tho, I HAVE to know what happens...
The Fourth Fate chapter 3 . 8/22/2005
WOW. OMG. Can you say chills? This story is INCREDIBLE! The morbid-ity (hahahhaha i made up a word) of it is inspiring a HUGE craving to write chapter 13 of The Legend Of Black Water Cove. Unfortunely, that will have to wait until later tonight. Like Angel, I REALLY want to pass math... Anyway, I can't wait to see how everything is resolved.

What was with Rider asking if Lillian would go out with him? He didn't even KNOW her. Jesus...I am sensitive to death... WOW. Anyway... From the point of view of another writer, I believe that to have been either foreshadowing to someting later on or an intro/excuse to bring up Lillian... Hm. Interesting none the less. I'm begining to really get attached to these characters. I love them all. Poor poor Lillian. I can't decide whether or not to hate Xander or not... If Lillian loved him, shouldn't we? Hahahaha. I always do try to put myself in favor of the bad guy... Can't wait to finish this... it has incredible potential...
The Fourth Fate chapter 2 . 8/22/2005
OMG. SO creepy so far. G-d I felt the pain of the mimick crusifiction. Do you have ANY idea how amyn ngihtmares I'm gonna have? Well I suppose that means you did a fabulous job. If I can muster up the courage, I might just have to keep reading...

Is it finished yet? I'm not sure...
Timothy Hazelo chapter 4 . 8/21/2005
I knew it. I really don't feel sorry for Rider.I really don't feel sorry for Lillian the one I do feel great sorrow for is Angel. How can this be happening to her!
miss-blackhair chapter 4 . 8/20/2005
you know what i realised, the names of the characters remind me of buffy and a character of my story is ryder! wat a coincidence! well, i like the plot
Kirem chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
I wish i could continue reading right at this moment, but I can't. Very good however, really enjoying this. Its nice to see some work with true descriptions. Keep it up.
Timothy Hazelo chapter 3 . 7/25/2005
OMGOSHNESS! RIDER IS GOING TO DIE! NO! NO! And, another clue, Xander T. ...Hm... 2005, is it based in the same time as us? OMG! HE'S NOT GOING TO DIE! NO!
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