|Reviews for The Grimen Chronicles Book 2: The Twisted Creator|
| For real tho no chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Dude that was absolutely SICK (in a good way... I think)! When you introduced Jim, I had a feeling he wanted to bone the wife :P Man, that guy is insane, man. CRAZY! Like a guy you want to hate, but understand where he's coming from.
| Misoshiru chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
i have 2 points. 1: that was totally and utterly sick. DO NOT CHANGE. lol. 2: it was very good. although it was sick, i still liked it. and yes u may call me a sadist, sicko, or anything u want but i still liked it. and as far as i know i am not mentally ill. update soon ok?
| dragonelemental chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
wow. Kind of disturbing... but awesome! You could really go far writing horror stories... as long as you dont get too carried away and actually do some of this stuff. Just kidding. Bet seriously this is a realy amazing story, you should add some more details as to how eric was made.. is he mechanical? bio-mechanical? And you definitely need to write more, i'll be checking.