Reviews for Thirteen
Alley Rhodes chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
beautiful ending!I really enjoyed it. Don't be so hard on yourself, your pretty good!
less-than-imperfect chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
if ever my assumption is right then weren't you pretty young? if ever it's wrong, then ignore just ignore my first statement. don't hate yourself, dear, you might hate everything else too.
Elizabeth Bilberry chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
the ending just surprised me; i didn't think it would end like that. amazing poem as always. your poems just blow me away.

lucy chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Omfg how dep man
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Very powerful and full of emotion. Excellent job!
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Oh wow, what a well written poem, but so so sad! *sobs*. Aww, how I can relate. You are talented!

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