Reviews for Ache
qblisa chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
Hey, I finally decided to come on over to FictionPress and read your other work. I must say I have a soft spot for poetry, especially angst ones.

The line that drew me in was "But loss of hope"

Your poem described the hollow feeling of loss of hope perfectly... Hope is what sustains us, but without it we are nothing, "pointless" and "empty".

Beautifully written.

Lisa
unspecified chapter 1 . 8/15/2006
wow. i love it, it doesn't seem like just scribbles, it's sounds like you put a lot of thought into it. i love it!

write on!

bekah