|Reviews for Forceful Combination|
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
typo on the first word. oops. sorry. that just distracts me when i read something. even though like 90% of the time it's a typo i made. hehe. i love the poem. great topic to write on. and it didn't drag at all or come off as whiny or amateurish, like most about this kind of thing would. you took a deep concept and you did it proud. love the imagery and the honesty and truth. the ending was awesome. ) do me a favour and check out something i've written?
| Jane Piper chapter 1 . 6/13/2005
Very nice work, I really like the last two lines because I feel that way a lot. Keep it up! (please review back)-Buffy