|Reviews for Oh! Woe is Acantha!|
| Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
Yeah, I was not quite sure how to end it...Am still trying to figure it !
| Eyetk chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Great poem-truely, a work of art! Just one comment...
"Now she is to
Stay forever more
in the form of
...somehow, that didn't seem to fit as well with the rest of the poem. Perhaps it's the language that you used (less powerful then the first part), but I'm really not sure. Anyhow, a thought for you to ponder!