Reviews for creepy kid
CW-nerd-12 chapter 1 . 9/25/2005
I really like this. The ending may seem a little weird, I think i may be because it breaks the whole character descrition thing you had going, but, hey, it's your poem, take a look at it yourself and do what you think is best. Keep writin'!
happy thing chapter 1 . 7/16/2005
This is an amazing poem. I love the way you write. It's addictive, you finish one line and hardly stand the wait it takes for your eyes to dart down to the next. Wonderful effect and a marvelous job. Well done.
Prevaricate chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Delicious.

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this is britt chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
I loved it. Nicodemus Drake is a great name. I had a meltdown in school once. cheers!
godsandstars chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
oh wow this is really good. so much imagery. great job!
and flowers chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
i cannot quite grasp how amazing this is. i love him, i really do (in a conceited make-me-be-the-girl-he-loves way)and we won't stop until we get it.-i like that you used the word "wonky".
ButterNJam chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Really cool poem. It reminds me of a kid in my grade who's parents don't pay alot of attention to him. It's sad.
peaceman4ever chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
wow...i like it,so deep