Reviews for Jen's Story |
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![]() ![]() ![]() r u ever going to update this? i relli like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Drake is such an &( uh but Damien sounds nice and more mature. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Drake seems dark and cunning. He is so in to himself I like the way you have developed this character and I also enjoy the sexual tension between Jen and Drake. Hormones raging and what not. |
![]() ![]() ![]() uh, f\he's arrogant he must be royalty. Nice chapter:) I like Jen's exotic look finally somone makes a lead character that is not pale, I, too, like a little spice sometimes. |
![]() ![]() ok, i do love this, lol this guy is so into himself and she rejected him, oh his pride was in the trash can. lol umm where is the next chapter? this story is really good what will you present us with next, i hope that you include more of this guy teasing the girl, hey why was jen trying to get out of a date with him? dont tell me they dont end up together because that wouldnt be there are more hot i think that the laura girl shouldnt appear again, she is such a 'B' this story needs to be continued. or is this one of those stories where people just stop writing because it says that it was posted in 05, aside from that i still think that this story is spicy, sexy, flirty, mysterious,fun,and written well. i agree with those other comments. is there anyway i can have something sent to me so i will be alerted when you update this story? or do i have to keep checking this story site? my best friend likes these vampire stories and i know she will find this one to be pleasing, i dont see anywhere that needs to be improved. |
![]() ![]() ok if that girl doesnt want to date the guy i will take him. so i know i have to read on but i think they should date in the next chapter. she better look damn good for him. i think this could be one of my favorite stories. |
![]() ![]() woah, i like this story, and the crimson guy sounds hot, good job on making him sound good. i hope we see alot of him throughout this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy poop on a stick i lovve it, vamps are my fave (nice way of dropping hints) i love the mystery and everything. |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude what's going on with the story, its been like 6 months to be honest and no chapter, maybe even longer than that. |
![]() ![]() great story update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL. THIS IS SO CUTE! I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. One question, Drake and Damien are just immortals right? Or are they gods? Or cursed? Or...? Just wondering. But so far, good story. Job well done keeping the energy up. I'll be waiting for the next part! |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg! he's such a cheeky sod! but, still ever so luvable! *sqee* ; can i *yoink* him? pls? he's too adorable, but i bet he knows that already. great chapter too, i can c y it was fun to write! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well, all i can say is WOO! go magen! P gd chappie 2, i think mebbe he shud'av timed it betta, then she mite'av sed yes... |
![]() ![]() This is good. i like it. |
![]() ![]() first you say christine has red hair, then you say blonde. whats up with that? |