As the story progresses I think Seth is less of a good guy and Tuesday is less of a bad guy. It is because of his history that Tuesday is especially qualified to say things like "don't kill yourself", and the fact that he bothered to say anything when Seth was ranting proves that he cares, even a little. It would have been too easy for Tuesday to be offended that Seth was saying the things he was saying, because at the end of the day he didn't mean it. Instead he, in his own way, tried to protect him.

I am loving this story. :)

Is it bad that the only thing I can think about cancer is that we're 16 chapters in and you're never *cured* of cancer, you only go into *remission*.

If this is the Fault In Our Stars I'm gonna cry again, I'm sure of it.

On a brighter note, your story is so good you totally could make me cry. :)

Aweh man. Now something has to happen to Jon and Tuesday for Tuesday and Seth to become a thing, and I really like Jon and Tuesday as a couple already. Especially with *years* under their belt.

I'm loving this story! You write Seth so well, and it's easy to understand how he's thinking.

There is one thing that confused me, when Tuesday said "Canteen is so American". I'm American and I have no idea what canteen is. Is it like a restaurant or snack bar or like vending machines?

Thank you for all the years you spent putting this to life. I seriously admire you. Hope you (and Ez) are okay. Many years have passed and I wonder where are you now. Will you ever see my comment. Do you think about tha story. Once again, if you are okay. But independent of the answer, I cannot-not-write anything about it. Because, oh my god. Where are all my words? Where do I start?

English isn't my first language and I'm pretty tired for sorry for any mistakes.
I've read it for 4 days straight and I'm not even kidding. And I do not regret any of that time and Lord knows I should be, 'cause many other things needed to be done.
I felt it. I felt this story, I didn't just read it, I have felt it and have lived it. Seth's emotions became mine at some point and I just couldn't stop scrolling the page and hitting "next" because I needed to know if it gets better, for him, and for me. I don't know if I like him. But I surely don't dislike him, as I normally hate characters (and people) who can't stand for themselves. For Seth it was just so consistent and so justified, that even though I wanted to scream "JUST TELL IT, DO IT, DON'T LET HIM/HER/THEM SAY THOSE THINGS" more than once, if he did it (while not being angry or something of course)... it wouldn't be so realistic.
And, and... everything in this story seems to be so well thought. I mean, the title's meaning revealed in 30-something chapter? And making sense in that way? And all characters' actions, little, little actions that were important long chapters later? And general little actions which made me believe that it all happened, that it is happening right now? While reading I was thinking that it should never stop, because it's so real life it shouldn't have an end.
Well, it doesn't have. But I'm not mad. Just sad, a little. At least it was this chapter, while things seems to be worked out kinda, not any of the previous, where explosion run after another explosion.
And, it was drama and angst. And it was real. So real. Not pissing me of teenage drama.
This story made me think about my life on a few levels. The abuse. Group of friends like them. The feeling that you just want to sleep through your whole life.
I don't know.
And while it wasn't optimistic at all, I see the bright side. Maybe everything isn't so bad. Maybe things can be fixed.

Clear ends aren't my forte, so, just. This story has a part of my heart, and it also IS a part of my heart now.
Sendin' love.

I guess this will always be an incomplete story?

Suuuuuuuuks

Too bad it ends like this.

I loved the story. Are you ever going to write the last chapter?

Very well written story, here and there are a few things a good editor can polish up, but still very good overall.
My only points of criticism is of course the lack of an ending and the emotions/experiences portrayed are so vivid, poignant and stirring that their resemblance to something real is uncanny.

I love this story so much! ARGH! I hate myself for coming back to this again and again and again. Just know, Dirty Angel Toes that where ever you are- I will be waiting. I will re-read this again and tell my grandchildren's children's children about this story. I will tell them that this story breaks and mends and breaks your heart so many times that its a danger to society. They will know of SETH and TUESDAY because they are damn well worth knowing! Thanks for writing this.

Man, man. This is the second time I've read this story and I think it actually was more incredible the second time. Thank you, wherever you are- for writing this. I'll probably be back in a year to re- read it, thanks for that too, man. MAN, oh man. Man.

I've been following this story for ages. I actually haven't come back to check if you've updated for about three years, since I started med school. I loved this story. I remember once coming back and seeing you post an update saying that you wouldn't continue writing because of what was happening in your life. I... I don't understand. How. Why? Why? I know you, you're the author of your story, and you can bloody well do whatever you feel like but how about the rest of us. How could you give us this amazing story and leave us hanging? Don't you have any responsibility towards you readers that stuck with you throughout the whole time? If this was how you wanted it, then shouldn't you have written the story privately and kept it to yourself? I know I'm being unfair because you have the right to say if you don't like it, then you can take a hike. BUT it's so unfair. I think you have a duty to your readers. Your story is fantastic. Even if you don't want to write another chapter, can't you at least tell us what happens in a few sentences? Leaving us hanging is cruel. Even if you make it a terrible ending, at least tell us that ending. At least then we can put our minds at ease and hate this story. T_T but thats IF you decide to give it a terrible ending. SIgh. I just finally want you to update.. I'm sorry. I know you must've been having a terribly difficult time. Anyways, you can just ignore whatever I said, I still love your story, and me ranting and raving is proof of that. If you ever feel up to it, I'd love it if you update. But until then, ciao. Live long and prosper. I hope you're well and happy.

This story- omigod this story. It got me hooked so bad I went nuts when I realised that there wasn't an ending because of one chapter. Howdy. The emotions described by Seth was uber fantastic- I seriously loved it. I couls feel his anguish, happiness and tears so vividly it's amazing. Please update the ending.

WHAT!? Dude no you cannot end it there. It's cruel.

I am loving this book, but Tuesday is a bit of a twat. Like if they are in foster care there's a reason, be a little more sensitive

I really like this so far, it's very discriptive but not boring and the mix of complex and simple sentences really helps set the tone. It seems very professional, actually a little George Orwell esque but that may just be because I've spent the last hour doing my course work on him.