Reviews for Open the Door
sunshineofyourlife chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
i love the rhythm.

Slave of Socks chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Great rhythm you've got going here. I like the repetition of "open the door." The only thing I'd point out is the ending, which doesn't flow as nicely as the rest of the poem. I understand the effect you're going for there, but you might want to fiddle around with it a bit to see if there's another way you could do it. Just a suggestion, though. _

((Thanks for the review, by the way. It gave me a chance to go back and look at my poem - it's been about four years since the last time I bothered to read it. I'm quite embarrassed about the general presentation! Thank you for reminding me about it. I'll try to fix it when I have the chance.))