Reviews for Release
Ayla King chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
Wonderful poem - evokes powerful feelings. Makes you "feel" the thunderstorm as a kid would (did), and relate it to deeper issues...and the writing is great. I like to provide criticism as well to help people improve, but don't have any for you :-)(Except - should there be another word at the end of the second to last line?)
stillanangel chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
wow that's a cool poem. good job