Reviews for on the marble arch
TwystedFate chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
This is sheerly amazing, as always, and "Hallelujah" is a great song, so you win even more than you previously had in my mind. I really do love it; great job.
kalmia raphael chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
right... i liked this one even though it made me sad, and it was a little dreamy... and it was just so numbing when she said she didn't feel anything but then remembered when she was in the room. and the childhood memories and the timing played around with was 't quite get the ending... thought she drove off road or something...

' and so will I.

Have fun, mother.'

*shiver* that was a perfect ending. i'm not sure.. is she going to die or... ?

really unique as usual with you P i don't have any more to say... just... loved it, loved it.
Kyla chapter 1 . 6/15/2005
Wow, you are very good at descriptive writing. I love reading descriptives. I like how you filled the story with emotion as well. It's great!