Reviews for Pain
nyvashorte chapter 1 . 10/3/2005
WOw... This is really good! It "grabbed" me. Keep writing! :) Thanks for the review!

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AllyCred chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
*WOW*...this poem describes me in more ways then one...you have really captured me in these lines and i can identify with the pain and the struggle felt with every word...well done this is a fantastic expression of emotion. lots of love AllyCred
no one chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
This one is okay I guess. It switches rhythm kindof in the middle and towards the end, it's a little confusing and makes the whole poem a bit unsatisfying, but it still has a point, a message, something to say I suppose, so not too bad overall.