:D Innovative way to start a story! I'm dying for explanations.

I loved each and every chapter! good job on everything- especially the ending. Most people leave it at the "I do's" and don't go on to explain the happiness that actual marraige might bring. You're a great author, I look forward to reading your other work!

-Webster

Your chapters are a little short, but I really love your style of writing! Believe me, your books belong in stores, not on the internet

-Webster

hey there alex! ) thanks for this story, the plot's great! you might want to touch up on the grammar though...I noticed you tend to use "is" instead of "it's", like in chapter 10 when carla was commenting on chris. apart from that it's pretty awesome, so good job!

by the way, i LOVE this: "Alec sat there under the early summer sun and considered his options; he could try another dash for the river but that might get his dad mad, and then Chris would take Frog away..." the thought of alec fretting over a frog whom he treated so dearly that he capitalised the F is very believable and adorable )

soo i rlly rlly liked this one. so when i was reading the chap when marco first came to Windam Palace and Carla said that she wanted to throw a ball i thought she meant throwing a spherical object not like adance. i was so confuzzled at first lol. (i know im a loser) anyway im going to read ur nxt story in this series instead of studying for midterm lol.

i luv the list cant wait to read more

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Thanks so much for the reference to Casablanca, my favorite movie of all time. It just made me fall in love with the story even more. And I love Chris and Kaze!

-Hippiechick

Hehe, I loved how the last part was in Alec's POV, well kind of, anyway, another awesome fic by you! I loved it!

yes! chapter 1 is the best! i feel bad for her! lo siento tanto! pobresita!

amazing job

belle

aw, i just reread this!

heya, this a wonderful story. i'm glad chris forgave kaze for lying to him and that they got married :) cya later ~ Alenor.

i can only say one word: "wow"

Oh my! So many times I've tried to make a perfect sorta pretend lifestyle with a king and queen and their children with love. And when I read this last chapter...all I can say is so sweet! This is a great stgory keep it going! :)