Reviews for The Sword and the Wall
ira chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
you're a very talented writer! :-
The Pointed Hat chapter 1 . 9/16/2007
The greatest portion of this poem is, "The sword is cold and deadly/but it doesn't stand alone." A very clever line, and I believe it's what makes this poem a good one. Nicely done!
no.peace.los.angeles chapter 1 . 2/24/2006
Favorite line: the combination of "The wall is cold and lonely" and "The sword is cold and deadly." That's a cool way to put something. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
Cellar Door Mongrel chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Nice. I like this.
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
wow. now there is something to think about.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
wow.. powerful and creepy.. awesome job
The Moribund Marionette chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
This was great, although not quite as high as your other poem. Fantastic. I appreciate your poetry. Writer of darkness