Reviews for Beauty Misunderstood
citrus scented chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
another gem, this is fantastic. its elegant, smooth and neatly woven together. i love the comparison to scratches "made in a moment of passion" - and once again the ending line is perfection.
the.pink.life chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
Hey, nice poem. I love the line "we are like scratches made in a moment of passion." Great image there.
sunstormed chapter 1 . 7/6/2005
gorgeous work, i love the metaphors. the last line was especially lovely
Crazy Biene chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
hey! Congrats on ur wedding! I hope ya'll have a gr8 life 2gether! Neways LOVE the poem! Coolios! It'S so damn true!

ooh...um...are u still against Christianity?

Urs, Biene.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Excellent contradictions, very good. I love the theme.
WarriorHeart chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
awesome. brilliant job with words yet again, keep it up!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
powerful and beautiful similies
CrazyChik chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
As always ur poetry is WONDERFUl. CONGRATULATIONS on ur wedding! I am REALLY happy for you! I wish you all the best! *sniff* How come I didn't get an invitation? *grins* neways...I like chocolate cake..hopefully that was what ur weding cake was *grin grin* jk. Congrats!
youzi chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
i liked how you ended this.."The imperfect perfection of humanity and beauty misunderstood"..lovely..do keep writing D
The Moribund Marionette chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
Whoa, this was awesome. Fantastic, really...it was gorgeous, and so meaningful. I could see the images produced by these words. Keep it up! Writer of Darkness