cassandra and brent shouldnt end up together oh my that would be so cliche! It would be cool for Brent to try win Breanna back and remind her what shes missing and for her to realise what shes feeling for Devon is just temporary infatuation and attraction due to it all being new however her feelings for Brent are deep,true and solid throw a obsessive and violent Devon into it BOOM. Could Brent forgive her though? Or would it be too late?

The inner dialouge is s bit distracting...

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Update soon please! It's such a great story so far:)

Your writing is decent. Choppy, not enough/a lot of details. If that's what you're going for then you succeeded, otherwise you have some heavy duty editing to do. It's a cliché throughout the whole story, beginning to end. I called every action easily, which takes away the fun of reading a book. As far as the Cassie and Brent plot line goes, please avoid it at all costs. I'd rather Brent turn out to be gay than for them two to get together, it's sooo obvious that's where

you're heading that it makes me not want to continue reading for the sake of a decent story going bad. Throw some plot twists in there! Make her have sex with Brent and he shows her how true love is supposed to feel. Make Devon's Mom make an appearance. Make shit get real, and do it really quick, because I'd hate to see a story with such a bright future lose all of its light.

It would be awesome if you update after all these years. But, yeah I really enjoyed this story. I like what Devon brings out of Breanna. Yet, it also makes both of them very insecure about each other. They are so afraid of letting one another in. It also sucks that she is still with Brent, that relationship is clearly dead. As for Cassie, I feel sorry for her. But, she is also a bad friend. Zoey has potential of being a good friend, but I don't think we'll see that happening. But, I do love Devon and Breanna.

Such a good structure I hate that you haven't continued yet ? :( please update :) please please in loving this book

Um, well I really liked this story til I got to this chapter and found out it wasn't finished... I'm assuming you have abandoned this story... And (just a suggestion) you might want to put in the summary that this is on hiatus... it's not really fair to unsuspecting readers that come to read a good story to find out it's not finished nor have you updated in over 4 years. Sorry if I sound rude, that is not my intention. I hope you can finish this story... it would be really great if you did, but until that (if and when) happens I really suggest putting in the description that this is on hiatus...

This story is really good. When is the next update?

I love this story. Do not abandon it. I love it.

Thanks.

update

haha, an extra new reviewer for you! lol

Anyway, I LOVE this story, PLEASE update soon...later... 10 years... somehow... ever...

Hi, haven't reviewed until this chapter. So far, I love it. Please update soon! I need more after I finished reading whatver you have posted!

i love your story and i have to say your icon is awesome. love it.

Oh no... the end? I lost this link like years ago and finally found it again. i cant believe ill never know what happens :c well... if you ever get this, i really enjoyed this story and have been trying to find it on and off for the last few years. hey! its never to late to finish it ;D