Reviews for Confusion of the dazed
remmyalamode chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Alyak...very good poem, its easy to pour your heart out in a story, but you didnt overdo it and thats a good thing...cant wait to read your other storys.

~Bree
Drowned-Rat chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
This is actually pretty nice for a first post :D
Akira Bane chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
Alright, you asked for opinions...

I like your style its dark and brooding.

The way you got your poem positioned is real nice.

Very good for your first post.