|Reviews for Confusion of the dazed|
| remmyalamode chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
Alyak...very good poem, its easy to pour your heart out in a story, but you didnt overdo it and thats a good thing...cant wait to read your other storys.
| Drowned-Rat chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
This is actually pretty nice for a first post :D
| Akira Bane chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
Alright, you asked for opinions...
I like your style its dark and brooding.
The way you got your poem positioned is real nice.
Very good for your first post.