Reviews for The truth
white-rose260 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
deep deep deep deep deep. my life is't so bad as that but at times i can really relate to ur poetry. if this is ur life i wish i coould help.
remmyalamode chapter 1 . 6/21/2005 that part "Let’s float to heaven;Then fall to hell" Its very mis-interputed, meaning, you dont have to be gothic to wright like that. That is poetry. Everyone has a dark side though, you express yours in poem, while others in song and dance, and storys and such. Beautiful poem though.
Drowned-Rat chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
Akira Bane chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
This is getting better! Its vastly different from the other one.

You're already getting there. Good job!
Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
Very powerfully written, great work. The ending in particular is really strong.