Reviews for parts of this week, unfinished
Pheobe Meryll chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
I like the sincerity in this poem. I think you made it in all lowercase to add to the feel, but it made it grammatically incorrect.
gnimrodd chapter 1 . 8/14/2005
well, i'm bakc on fictionpress! i just posted my first two chapters of book from beach. yay! well i'm excited for when you get back.. and oh yeah, about the poem.. i love the diet coke reference.. like a lot.. very smart thinking my darling big mac. "in a black dress that hugged my body" *wink wink* got that little black dress you were talkin' 'bout.. hahahaha.. D
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
i crave beautyiful friendship & love,... beautiful

well done.. i lvoe the foprmat although i might separate it into stanzas
CW-nerd-12 chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
hey, this little series is pretty good! I didn't quite care for the last one (bit too cliched, maybe). But I love the diet coke one. So fabulous!
Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 6/16/2005
Love the last two the best. It would be wonderful if you make these into something more, but they're great now, too.