|Reviews for Salt|
| lackluster chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
it stands so well by itself(the poem) and i get it, sort of. nice poem. keep writing!
| Teddy Ricker chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Interesting, what does it mean? ~P'Dale Buddy out
| youzi chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
hmm..i'm not sure what is the message of this it is an interesting little snippet narrative-wise. do keep writing D
| godsandstars chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
I don't understand it. But maybe that's the point. It rhymes nicely though.