Reviews for Without You
AllyCred chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
this is amazing...i love it...well done...so much emotion and pain running through these lines...i love it. lots of love ~AllyCred~
loster chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
it seems short, buty its pretty good too
Ivy Shoelaces chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
I believe that evryone goes through these emotons at least once in their life, but you put it into words. Most people cannot do that. I clap for you.~PhantasmicElfPirate
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
it works, it flows! :D
queenvixta chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Aw hunni this is amazing. Had my on the verge of tears. It just completley rings true with me. I hope everything works out and even if it doesn't I promise that you'll get through it. queenvixta
MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
I hope everything with your family member turns out allright. I'll keep him/her in my prayers. This piece was beautiful. I was almost crying from the beginning. You are just so talented. I can really see your poetry taking you somewhere. Keep writing and good luck.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
You have too...to

very sad and powerful.. awesome emotion in this although ill make it into stanzas
Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
this is soo sad...absolutely touching. I love it. I'm sorry for what's happening. I hope everything turns out good for you.

~Sorrow~
ForgottenHope chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
that song is so nice. i just experienced a death in my family recently, so it really touched me. thanks for writing it.