Reviews for Meg Ramsey |
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![]() ![]() Aww man I was seriously getting into it and was so excited I finally found a good story to read...:( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE this story so much! There are many reasons for this but I will begin with what I think are most important to a story. First, Meg is a likable believable character who you can't help but cheer on. The same goes for Peter. I have to admit I kind of fell for Peter myself. Next there is your writing style, which flowed wonderfully. It was smooth and descriptive without being overly so. While the ending was easy to guess, I thoroughly enjoyed getting there :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG Are they going to switch places? Or...the prince disguises himself as not a prince and Meg becomes a princess? OMG I'm so excited. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting i like how this is kinda like cinderella but with a MAJOR twist...hehe. and i really like how when the anthony and meg first met they weren't making googly eyes at each other... and i swear the names are all modern!xD If I ever read a fairytale by Hans whatshisname with characters called "Rachel" etc etc, I'd probably fall outa my chair! x |
![]() ![]() ![]() So i've just now finished reading this. I would have posted a review every chapter or something like that, but since it was already finished when I started reading I didn't think it would be necessary! :D Just like Solitaire, I was thrilled with this story. The twists and turns, the love triangle, the happy ending (yay for Anthony!) and, just...*sigh* speechless. really. I can't wait to get started on another story, not sure which though. Untill I finish another one! Caylei |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, this is a wonderful story! i thought at one stage that you'd have meg and anthony eventually fall in love and peter get over her and fall in love with celia or something, but i like what you've done. it's really great. cya later ~ Alenor. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it. :) It was well written and believable. God has blessed you with a great talent, and it should be shared with the world! :) Keep it up! EdwardDazzlesMe |
![]() ![]() Great fic so far; however, the constant changing of the names keep bugging me. I tried to ignore it when it was just the six possible brides, but then you changed Margaret/Meg's last name from Ramsey to Hepburn in this chapter. My advice - keep some sort of character list since you have trouble remembering them. Please don't take this as a flame but as constructive criticism. I will still continue to read this fic because it intrigues me. Although, it reminds me too much of Disney's Cinderella movies and I hope that something exciting will happen if I'm going to keep reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found your story from reading Solitaire and thought I'd read this one as well. I have to admit I was a little scared for a while there, thinking it was going to end in misery for all three of the main characters who you wrote so beautifully! All in all, it was a great great story! The ending was wonderful and your descriptions were awesome! I know you said before you were in the middle of editting, but I just wanted to let you know that some of the characters names don't match up. I especially noticed in the beginning with the suitors. Really though, a great book, I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update asap! Love it so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha. new reader. but i couldn't help it. i skimmed through the last chapter. so i kinda know about jane and the prince getting marrie. and peter and meg getting together in the end. but hey it's nice to read how they got there. so i will read it. but sometimes it looses my interest since the paragraphs are way too long. unlike some other stories. btw. it's pretty good so far. but really long. i mean jeez! 50 chapters! it better be worth it in the end. ima continue tomorrow! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love holidays! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gah! I can't believe how late I am to read this! (Stupid school ...) Anyway, a really lovely ending to a beautiful story. There's not much I can say other than that I fully enjoyed it and am waiting in anticipation to read your other work. Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, it's over. It was amazing though (: |
![]() ![]() I love it! amazing writing. |