Reviews for Suffering of the trapped
white-rose260 chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
ur poems really get to me just know so many people feel this way
Rusty And The Rubix Horse chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
A very powerful and well written poem. Nice job.
remmyalamode chapter 1 . 6/21/2005 express all your feelings extremely well, for starting to write, just one and a half years ago...right?
Akira Bane chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
Yes, brooding certainly describes your style! I really like the last line, it suits the poem well.

How long have you been writing? You're real good at this.
Drowned-Rat chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
Yes, the illusion of freedom is revealed to be a neverending Hell. You expressed this well :D.