|Reviews for People|
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 7/30/2005
Wow. This is wonderful. I really like it.
| liz anya chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
So true about people. Great poem, so contemplative.
| appo1 chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
sharee bhia...this is too god
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Yea, lot of good questions here that no one can really answer. This world and all the people in it are really...fucked...
| Aithwayth chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
this is very true for anybody... we protect ourselves and we don't realize that if we are just honest to begin with, we get into less trouble later on. Well written. there's just a few typos... but nothing extreme. Kudos.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
I love how it becomes simplistic, but then the lines grow longer and longer and more abstract. And then the nice transition from questions to answers.
| Sorrowful Dreams chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
very clever work. I like the flow and the meaning to this. You're right about everything that has been written here, great work!
| Drowned-Rat chapter 1 . 6/17/2005
People as a whole drives individuals from who they originally were. Groups set specific standards for the cruelest of things. People as a whole, should die; Individuals should strive and break this monotonomy of life. :D
I like poems that make me think :D