Reviews for CHALLENGE
Wing Chant chapter 1 . 10/4/2005
Lol! No need to review? No need to review? But, oh, I must. I thought that this was just a display of silliness and fun, so it's not meant to be taken seriously! Almost like someone was suffering from writer's block one day, and decided to write down whatever they were thinking at that moment. I'm guessing you didn't want to write a poem at that time, but were forced to (school, maybe?) and so you wrote about how stupid writing the poem was. P Hahaha. That's what I got out of it. Great sense of humor!

loserz. ;)
RealmNight chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
very cute poem...i like it-GoTN
somerandomdude chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
I don't think it's a real iambic tetrameter, the stresses and rhythm is a bit off sometimes. Still a nice try, and funny as well, especially since you don't like rhymes (But rhymes are very nice though, free verse can make you lazy and make you write very bland verses, or worse, bland prose into verse.)