You only have two songs on here? That's a little disappointing, I wanted to read more. But this one was good, you know? I could hear a tune as I read the lyrics, and it sounds good for what I've got. You've got great talent, you know? Keep writing.

B.

"Have you grew kind or never was"?

The grammar is too bad. This song sounds like a whiny journal entry that tries to rhyme. I don't know, it's just very weak.

oh hahaha here i am!it was really easy finding you lahhwell you have a obvious potential in this field!wonderful way of words my dear friend!) im looking 4ward to ure next songs!and then i shall review them!i could really feel what you were feeling when you wrote itso i guess that's good rightcongrats on getting 4 reviewsand i was the one who stole your underware!gettit?underware! not underwear!gosh man i am LAME

ok then see you in school!xoxotakaayour nicest and most sadistic fren!wahahahagoodluckin ure pmr k?love ya!

Oh, I wish I could hear it, it sounds like an awesome song! very nice

This is not exactly a review. Nice poem. Just that...I couldn't help but to...*Tell you inh school* p

The chorus is nice. Make more please.