Reviews for When Doves Cry chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
nice lol i just saw this and i was like HEY thats a song by prince lol
Aj Riley chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
I really like the start of this story. It's very . . . well, bittersweet is the best word. But I mean that in a totally good way. You managed to bring a kid dealing with such a horrible thing, and still keep such an air of innocence to the story. Great job. I look forward to reading more. :-)
The Lark Ascending chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Very sweet! I like your ideas.

One thing: the title of your story should be "When Doves Cry" rather than "When Dove's Cry" - unless for some bizarre reason you mean for it to be possessive "Dove's" instead of plural "Doves".

Great beginning!
Sazzy chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
I'm lazy.


Love me
Chrissy chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Aw, that is the cutest beginning of a story that i have read! i like this story a lot so 're a really good writer Jage!
toothofthehydra chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Aww that's cute, excellent start. Poor Adrian! You are a really amazing writer though, to be able to write something that sad and make it seem believable.
aknightsgoldenrose chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
aw they are so cute! I love this story so have to update this one!
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