|Reviews for When Doves Cry|
| sourgummyworms2007 chapter 2 . 6/26/2005
i like this story. it's kind of helpful when u tell us who it is. personally. i don't know though
| PrettySoldier.SailorMoon chapter 2 . 6/26/2005
Love it. Please right more.
| Aestas Memoriola chapter 2 . 6/26/2005
OH, IT'S ALL 'ME, ME, ME' NOW, HUH? DIDN'T YOUR PARENTS TEACH YOU TO NOT BE CONCEITED?
You disappoint me, Jage. The world doesn't revolve around you.
It revolves around me.
(P.S. Nice chapter! Teehee. I'm hungry...)
| flies.like.decay chapter 2 . 6/26/2005
jesses girl!im in love with jesses girl!lol stop giving away all my favorite 80's songs write more i'll...i'll...i'll e- beat you with a stick!
| flies.like.decay chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
nice lol i just saw this and i was like HEY thats a song by prince lol
| Aj Riley chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
I really like the start of this story. It's very . . . well, bittersweet is the best word. But I mean that in a totally good way. You managed to bring a kid dealing with such a horrible thing, and still keep such an air of innocence to the story. Great job. I look forward to reading more. :-)
| The Lark Ascending chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Very sweet! I like your ideas.
One thing: the title of your story should be "When Doves Cry" rather than "When Dove's Cry" - unless for some bizarre reason you mean for it to be possessive "Dove's" instead of plural "Doves".
| Sazzy chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
THAT IS SO CUTE! aw
| Chrissy chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Aw, that is the cutest beginning of a story that i have read! i like this story a lot so 're a really good writer Jage!
| toothofthehydra chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Aww that's cute, excellent start. Poor Adrian! You are a really amazing writer though, to be able to write something that sad and make it seem believable.
| aknightsgoldenrose chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
aw they are so cute! I love this story so far...you have to update this one!