|Reviews for When Doves Cry|
| flies.like.decay chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
nice lol i just saw this and i was like HEY thats a song by prince lol
| Aj Riley chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
I really like the start of this story. It's very . . . well, bittersweet is the best word. But I mean that in a totally good way. You managed to bring a kid dealing with such a horrible thing, and still keep such an air of innocence to the story. Great job. I look forward to reading more. :-)
| The Lark Ascending chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Very sweet! I like your ideas.
One thing: the title of your story should be "When Doves Cry" rather than "When Dove's Cry" - unless for some bizarre reason you mean for it to be possessive "Dove's" instead of plural "Doves".
| Sazzy chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
THAT IS SO CUTE! aw
| Chrissy chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Aw, that is the cutest beginning of a story that i have read! i like this story a lot so 're a really good writer Jage!
| toothofthehydra chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Aww that's cute, excellent start. Poor Adrian! You are a really amazing writer though, to be able to write something that sad and make it seem believable.
| aknightsgoldenrose chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
aw they are so cute! I love this story so far...you have to update this one!