Reviews for When Doves Cry
BlueAki chapter 11 . 10/12/2009
I would definitely not trust Alyssa. She's like a snake waiting in a bush.
BlueAki chapter 10 . 10/12/2009
ugh, why is Elliot being so damn difficult!
BlueAki chapter 8 . 10/12/2009
I wish I had a friendship like they share.
BlueAki chapter 7 . 10/11/2009
oh man, why did he have to step away from her. he was being so selfish. Can't he think about her instead of how he's going to be alone?
BlueAki chapter 6 . 10/11/2009
OMG! I felt so terrible for her
BlueAki chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
aw, this was very sweet. I particularly like the part where they start talking about who owns who. That was funny.
AJ southern chapter 38 . 6/12/2009
good story, but unnecessarily drawn out sometimes. nicely done tho :)
christinaxxyo chapter 38 . 5/20/2009
Cute story but it was a bit boring and long. I think things could have moved a bit quicker, but it was still very interesting :)
christinaxxyo chapter 3 . 5/13/2009
The playful banter between Adrian and Ellie is adorable but your grammatical errors is making it hard for me to keep up x_x I still really like how the story is going though :D
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
I thought this was really cute but in need of a read-over. There were some minor mistakes but besides that, I liked it :)
CharlieandLola chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
well i like it so far! i am drawn in already by the way you have already shown an established relationship at a young age. it makes it more understanding on what will happen in the story,

love CharlieandLola
Rachel chapter 38 . 1/29/2009
I just finished reading your story and I must say that I am fairly impressed all around. However, one thing about it irks me to no end. The story title comes from the song she chose for her final dance before the cancer could take over. You talk about her practicing and everything. Why isn't the actual performance a part of the story? I know that Adrian is going through a lot at that time, but since you wrote in split pov why isn't Elliot's piece in there?
poohbear512862 chapter 38 . 1/4/2009
Gr8 story I lvd it
atreyu love chapter 11 . 1/2/2009
I hate Alyssa!

shes such a bitch,

and Adrian is so stupid, :(

i dont like him anymore!
atreyu love chapter 10 . 1/2/2009
I agree, Adrian is so stupid, telling her

he loves her? ughh.
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