Reviews for When Doves Cry
AJ southern chapter 38 . 6/12/2009
good story, but unnecessarily drawn out sometimes. nicely done tho :)
christinaxxyo chapter 38 . 5/20/2009
Cute story but it was a bit boring and long. I think things could have moved a bit quicker, but it was still very interesting :)
christinaxxyo chapter 3 . 5/13/2009
The playful banter between Adrian and Ellie is adorable but your grammatical errors is making it hard for me to keep up x_x I still really like how the story is going though :D
christinaxxyo chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
I thought this was really cute but in need of a read-over. There were some minor mistakes but besides that, I liked it :)
CharlieandLola chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
well i like it so far! i am drawn in already by the way you have already shown an established relationship at a young age. it makes it more understanding on what will happen in the story,

love CharlieandLola
Rachel chapter 38 . 1/29/2009
I just finished reading your story and I must say that I am fairly impressed all around. However, one thing about it irks me to no end. The story title comes from the song she chose for her final dance before the cancer could take over. You talk about her practicing and everything. Why isn't the actual performance a part of the story? I know that Adrian is going through a lot at that time, but since you wrote in split pov why isn't Elliot's piece in there?
poohbear512862 chapter 38 . 1/4/2009
Gr8 story I lvd it
atreyu love chapter 11 . 1/2/2009
I hate Alyssa!

shes such a bitch,

and Adrian is so stupid, :(

i dont like him anymore!
atreyu love chapter 10 . 1/2/2009
I agree, Adrian is so stupid, telling her

he loves her? ughh.
audry chapter 38 . 12/21/2008
Just wanted to say i loved your story! :)
rosierolle chapter 1 . 12/18/2008
this was a really good story. congratulations on a well written read!
Maiia A chapter 38 . 11/6/2008
I loved this story! I really liked that it wasnt all roses and sunshine. It was very well written and really descriptive. I love Adrian & Ellie together. & Sasha & Bryce are halarious & work great together. I dont like the ending though. I really wasnt expecting them to be a lightswitch couple (off and on). They really struck me as a couple who would stick together through thick and thin. Maybe break up once at the most. But its your story. I really liked it though :-)
Divisionred chapter 38 . 11/1/2008
Great story...thanks
BeingMyself chapter 4 . 10/19/2008
I really like your stuff but I think you and commas need to get together more often if you get what I mean... but then again, that's just my opinion.
BeingMyself chapter 3 . 10/19/2008
Ha, overweight? She is not! Actually, Ellie's technically underweight. Damn! Why is Erik gay? I really liked him *pout*.

Oh! And I love the length of your chappies.
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