Reviews for f l a t lined
persephone in waiting chapter 1 . 4/10/2006
Love your work. There is something about the things that youwrite which can give so little detail, yet explain so much, and make suh imagery. Love it. Keep writing.
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
oh... gorgeous depictions whilst telling an intriguing story... beautiful & sad.
AgainstAllOdds chapter 1 . 11/27/2005
beatifully created... i liked the format it made it that much more effective... POWERFUL! great job.
HellHeartedlyBent chapter 1 . 10/7/2005
wow...amazing imagery. this is going to favs list
Rozlin chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
beautiful. truely beautiful.
evm chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Beautiful. I like your slurring of words and the way they break between lines.
Suicidal Skies chapter 1 . 6/25/2005 have an interesting writting style! I love it to death
GypsyMothra chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
I really like the "butterflies" image. Nice. And the juxtaposition (I just had to use that word, forgive me) of the First words and Last.
and flowers chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
whoa horsies, so pretty sounding
Cursed-Destiny chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
This is beautiful "butterflies caress herhollow veins" - I love that
Alisha Marie chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
I really like's job!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
powerful.. love the ending.. awesome poem.. ncie repition
godsandstars chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Oh my God...this is an amazing peice of poetry. You are very talented, a complement I don't give often. Keep writing of suffer my...displeasure.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Nice transition throughout the poem, and clinching end with a tie to the beginning.
myno chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
gorgeously written, not at all an inadequate poem.
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