Reviews for ED
Sheets chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
So you -have- had an ED. We all write poems rather alike... Only yours are much better...
White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
I -love- this, especially the first few lines. I like how you wrote such an over-attempted topic and truly made it your own. Keep up the fabulous writing.

Unready chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
Profoundly effective. A nice social commentary. Good work.
Elise Oddity chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
I adore this piece. It's amazing, really. The formatting, the word choice, its all exceptional.
Infection chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
interesting, dark and most important of all excellant.
addie pray chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Raw, and well written.
lackluster chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
oh-so-true...i'm envious of how effective you made this!(lol) it just speaks to people(if that makes sense). great poem!
citrus scented chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
oh fantastic, you capture striving for perfection perfectly.
Pillow Biter chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
I have to say, great visuals, and the structure of this made it haunting! Great piece.
thank you thoughtful chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
i love this. i love how you've managed to descend about five plus levels into the human condition without anything excruciatingly descriptive at all. that is utterly amazing to me. wow.
apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 6/22/2005

Very very nice. It does put out a lot of emotion and for some reason the first thing that popped into my head was "drugs"...

I mean, hey if that's not what you wanted it to come across as then I don't mean to offend..But it does send out a message, which a total compliment!

So great job. Very thought-provoking.

Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
interesting. I think this could have been improved with a bit more length/description, but this is still nice in its own light.

smile persephone chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
This is so beautiful and evokes a lot of emotion. It holds so much power and lust and it's just lovely. Beautifully written.