Reviews for ED |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So you -have- had an ED. We all write poems rather alike... Only yours are much better... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I -love- this, especially the first few lines. I like how you wrote such an over-attempted topic and truly made it your own. Keep up the fabulous writing. -Hillary- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Profoundly effective. A nice social commentary. Good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this piece. It's amazing, really. The formatting, the word choice, its all exceptional. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting, dark and most important of all excellant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Raw, and well written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh-so-true...i'm envious of how effective you made this!(lol) it just speaks to people(if that makes sense). great poem! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh fantastic, you capture striving for perfection perfectly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say, great visuals, and the structure of this made it haunting! Great piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this. i love how you've managed to descend about five plus levels into the human condition without anything excruciatingly descriptive at all. that is utterly amazing to me. wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wosh. Very very nice. It does put out a lot of emotion and for some reason the first thing that popped into my head was "drugs"... I mean, hey if that's not what you wanted it to come across as then I don't mean to offend..But it does send out a message, which a total compliment! So great job. Very thought-provoking. Much Love-Suicidal_Greeting |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. I think this could have been improved with a bit more length/description, but this is still nice in its own light. -salt. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so beautiful and evokes a lot of emotion. It holds so much power and lust and it's just lovely. Beautifully written. |