|Reviews for ED|
| Sheets chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
So you -have- had an ED. We all write poems rather alike... Only yours are much better...
| White Tea and Ginger chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
I -love- this, especially the first few lines. I like how you wrote such an over-attempted topic and truly made it your own. Keep up the fabulous writing.
| Unready chapter 1 . 10/13/2005
Profoundly effective. A nice social commentary. Good work.
| Elise Oddity chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
I adore this piece. It's amazing, really. The formatting, the word choice, its all exceptional.
| Infection chapter 1 . 7/19/2005
interesting, dark and most important of all excellant.
| addie pray chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Raw, and well written.
| lackluster chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
oh-so-true...i'm envious of how effective you made this!(lol) it just speaks to people(if that makes sense). great poem!
| citrus scented chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
oh fantastic, you capture striving for perfection perfectly.
| Pillow Biter chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
I have to say, great visuals, and the structure of this made it haunting! Great piece.
| thank you thoughtful chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
i love this. i love how you've managed to descend about five plus levels into the human condition without anything excruciatingly descriptive at all. that is utterly amazing to me. wow.
| apromptedpoet chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Very very nice. It does put out a lot of emotion and for some reason the first thing that popped into my head was "drugs"...
I mean, hey if that's not what you wanted it to come across as then I don't mean to offend..But it does send out a message, which a total compliment!
So great job. Very thought-provoking.
| AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
interesting. I think this could have been improved with a bit more length/description, but this is still nice in its own light.
| smile persephone chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
This is so beautiful and evokes a lot of emotion. It holds so much power and lust and it's just lovely. Beautifully written.