Reviews for too far from perfect
Adonia Chesser chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
I don't get the last part, but this was good.
Selphie T. Kinneas chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
T-T

How horrible, but of coures we're all far from perfect right? I liked this one, and it something i can count on referring back to.
FunkyFlower chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
this is pretty sad but all the same a great poem. makes the person appear as if she is a broken toy. mabbe u should make it longer but apart from that, excellent! well done!