|Reviews for Writing with Diversity|
| SS-Smile chapter 4 . 6/20/2005
I would like to thank you for the reveiw. It was wonderful advice and I love cc. (Unfortunately some people think that cc is saying the story was really good and proceeding to insult it.) I didn't think about the first paragraph being too long, I was kinda writting it like a book and didn't think about online readers being different. Sorry for such a long comment, but thanks again for the reveiw and all of your advice was great.
| DarkerLink chapter 3 . 6/19/2005
wow! This is really useful! Im not a particularly good writer, so this is a great way to improve my story ... Thank you very much for your help!
| Kirstie Danielle chapter 3 . 6/18/2005
Well, it's nice to know the different sentence openers...I've used the majority of them before, yet never realized it until I read this. Very helpful little guide you have here.