|Reviews for Focus|
| Spiral Artist chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
This disturbed me to a great extent. Objectively, it's a great piece, but...
| Slowly Sinking chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Apart from that I personally think 'are two' would work better, grammar rules aside (coz I hate them), this is a really powerful piece, very well written. Great work.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/18/2005
Nice portrayal of different personalities.