It flowed really nicely and the idea was relatable. BUT, I think the rhymes were either forced or accidental

Very chilling, and I can really relate to the message.

This is the first thing I've read from you, and I just have to say I love your style.

"Help is not on it’s way because no one knows you have run away." - Great line.

Awesome, can't wait to read more! *!rock on fellow Canadian!*

This is an awesome poem! It rymes really well and sounds good together! ) Cool!

i can feel the emotion put in. keep writing 0)