|Reviews for Leaving Washington|
| rira-chan chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
great Haiku! i really liked it! thanks for your reveiw btw i really appreciate it -
| Penelope June chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
it sounda like washington DC... after visiting different things there...
| Michael McCarthy chapter 1 . 8/21/2005
This is good! I like it!
Keep up the good work.
P.S. my poem is now fixed. Finally
| Need 'n' Know chapter 1 . 8/16/2005
Yeah, freedom's a nice thing to have.
| addie pray chapter 1 . 8/13/2005
Seemed bittersweet. The best things are. I Loved the description "lovely elixers".
On another note, you are fantastic at deciphering poems.
| v3point7 chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
you know, i honestly don't understand haiku. but the 'lovely elixirs' part was pretty.
| Pricilla Cox chapter 1 . 8/7/2005
Sounds enchanting. You are lovely.
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 8/5/2005
I really like the last line. Really nice.
| Maxwell K chapter 1 . 8/3/2005
WOWZA VERY DEEP AND EXCELLENT !
| mercury.love chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
I live in Washington, so I love this one... so true. The last line is really interesting. Good job.
| hoellenwauwau chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Well, I've never been to Washington, but this one was great! cio, hoellenwauwau
| Horrible chapter 1 . 7/15/2005
Here is a haiku
For my sake take it to heart
Go and kill yourself
| aalagidude chapter 1 . 7/11/2005
I like the comparison you make. It might be freedom but it is mixed and might have a price later.
| AlwaysAmberella chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
| Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 7/5/2005
Simple & yet perfectly conceived.