|Reviews for Rosed|
| Confluence chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Liked the general concept, and how you personalized it in second-person pov. Might've been a little wordy though - "Life can be like a rose" to "Life is like a rose" or "Life is a rose", to have a clearer metaphor or simile there and clean opening. The first and last lines were powerful.
Nice piece of work.
| kayako.whoooooo no it's me your at the moment retarded soul sister p chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
short, but to the point (no pun intended. okay now i'm being stupid again). i love it. great analogy for life and what not.
| Rozlin chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
another good one.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Wow! What a well written poem. I completely enjoyed this. Write on!