Reviews for Rosed
Confluence chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Liked the general concept, and how you personalized it in second-person pov. Might've been a little wordy though - "Life can be like a rose" to "Life is like a rose" or "Life is a rose", to have a clearer metaphor or simile there and clean opening. The first and last lines were powerful.

Nice piece of work.

Confluence
kayako.whoooooo no it's me your at the moment retarded soul sister p chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
short, but to the point (no pun intended. okay now i'm being stupid again). i love it. great analogy for life and what not.
Rozlin chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
another good one.
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Wow! What a well written poem. I completely enjoyed this. Write on!

Anna