Reviews for A Daughter's Tears
Liebe Dance chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
I think this is a feeling that a lot of people have to deal with, the idea that they aren't living up to everything their parents want them to be. The poem captures that feeling really well. But it's written more like prose than like poetry. I don't know... it doesn't really seem much like a poem. Though a couple lines stand out "I'm no angel and I don't really belong here" is one I like. But, overall, this poem is honest and true. Which is good.
Nameless Azn Girl chapter 1 . 7/14/2005
Very, very convincing. "I try to tell the truth/But I've told too many lies"- I especially like that line. Keep up the good work. :)
Panda-Bear-42 chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
Very well written I like it! Good job and I understand exactly how it is. LaterBombshellbabe
Timothy Hazelo chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
I like the last line! LOL! Hey, Sign on to MSN! (I must have e-mailed you 5 times with no reply!)
beti213 chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
and yet at the same time you want to be punished because you know it's your fault. nice poem-well captured... I especially like the voice of a child even though the speaker is most likely older... the point of view is clear and intriguing