Reviews for Come Home
Needa S chapter 1 . 3/23/2006
Heartfelt. Beautifully done.
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 7/22/2005
a very nice little sad poem
Anna178 chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
I love the beginning, the little quizical question fits perfect for some reason. "How come whenever I need you, you're a thousand miles away"

hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
i like the beginning a lot. good job. some times the ones whos inspiration is unknown are the best
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Very heartfelt. I'm sure many can relate to this. It is a beautifully written poem.

Keep it up.
myno chapter 1 . 6/23/2005

i relate all too well.
ambiguityy chapter 1 . 6/23/2005
I can relate to this... and I like the pleading, longing tone in the last two lines.
Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Gentle longing, nice.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
a simple yet affecting poem, short but that doesn't dull the power this holds. beautiful work as always simple, wonderfully done. _

~* noelle
hellokittychic31 chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
short but meaningful..nice

Rosanna28 chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
Simple poem, but very powerful! I like it!

Much love, Rosanna.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/21/2005
i know that feeling, happens lots. nicely expressed
AboveTheSalt chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
I wrote something scarily similar to this a couple of nights ago... creepy/weird.

Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
*bursts into tears* oh my gosh, I can completely relate! I know exactly how you're feeling. I really love this poem because it's so simple yet so powerful and heartfelt. Beautiful! Write on!

queenvixta chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
Beautiful. So sad and very truthful. I can relate a lot. Great work. queenvixta
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