Reviews for Sleep
lymli chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
aw, sometimes everybody feels like a you know, really sad piece.
allyburner chapter 1 . 7/20/2005
Very powerful. I can almost see the blood dripping away. I love it. -Ally B.
penname1920 chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
this is quite the way you described it makes it seem so normal! i think THAT'S what's making it so scary!
Hidden Lies chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
Yes I can relate to this.. a great poem!
A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
One word - wow
justaghost chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
I don't mind that it's not particularly long or doesn't rhyme, I think it's very good. All in all it was great, don't change a thing about writing poetry!

graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
wow...its like the only word i have...WOW...

not only can i relate to it, but its like i can almost see myself if in a fading memory or something...

the ending is the best..."eternal sleep"...very well put...
drunken-doll chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
...wowlol It's awesome. You are truly an awesome poet. Your writing abilities extend far befor others. Deff. keep writing. wow. _kthanxPeace
daphnegray78 chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Very vivd... the imagery is accurate and haunting. Well done.

dress her up in fairytales chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
I'm glad to know that I'm not the only one that suffers from the cutting problems. I can relate to this one. I love it. Keep writing.
Anna178 chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
"let your emotions melt away" that is a really amazing line. I can get alot of emotion here. I hope your doing well.

hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
sad...i never liked cutting poems only because they make me sad. they can be very metaphoric and well written but they are sad. good job tho...
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Simple and full of emotions. I love this poem, the ending was so...creepy. I though this was really good.

Keep it up.
jaepoe chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
That made me shiver and I'm not exagerating. morbid and creepy, but that's a good thing in this poem, I think.
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
I like it but I feel you could use something else not a fingertip.
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