|Reviews for Untitled 6 20 05|
| lymli chapter 1 . 8/28/2009
aw, it's sweet, one can love a thousand times!
| Needa S chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
Loved the ending. Could work as a song too. Excellent write.
| shattered.heart.baby chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
well, i dont really believe much in love, but i like your poem. it could convince someone how much love rocks. sry it cant convince me. well, i have read a few of your poems, and i like them. keep it up, yo. later
| breezy nostrils chapter 1 . 7/23/2005
I like the last stanza the most. Nicely done!
| A Face Worth Remembering chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
I know this feeling too. So nice when it comes, a bitch when it leaves. Lol. Love the poem, great job.
| LyLTiArApRiNcEsS chapter 1 . 7/3/2005
Aww this was cute. It was a nice poem.
| ApplesCM chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
I aso love this one. The ending expecially. )
| drunken-doll chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
::sigh:: it's dreamy in a sense? Well to me atleast. Your words once again nicely flow and I
| born-again chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Nothing wrong with this at all! The repeat of the 3rd verse works really well.
| curt chapter 1 . 6/28/2005
I love you tons too sorry i dint have much time this morning and i dont know ether soo i read your poams and i do love you and im not fragil im some waht unbrakabal iv broken somany time that each time i bild my self up agan i becoum stronger than befor I love you and nothing can change that
| Anna178 chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
for being crap it sure got lots of reviews. lol. I get 11 if I'm REALLY lucky. Anyway, I dont think this is crap, and I'm proud to be your 19TH REVIEW!
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
aw. love can be worth everything with the right person. :) good poem...not ur worst! but not ur very best
| jaepoe chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
This is a very sweet poem, and reading this and your other poems, you're a really good poet. I like your ending the most, very good.
( could you help me with the stanzas?)
| charedice chapter 1 . 6/25/2005
you know, the thing I gained from reading this.. awaviod is an awesome word.
| Accalia Aeryn chapter 1 . 6/24/2005
This poem isn't bad, it's cute. I liked it. :)