|Reviews for A Darkened Dream|
| Sparkl3star chapter 2 . 7/9/2005
Fantastic, but on some parts alittle difficult to follow... Like, where'd the Young girl come in? o_O;
| Eyetk chapter 2 . 6/20/2005
Woot! For once, I'm not going to direct you to the page I usually direct people to, since their writing so often contains the problems it deals with. Um..feel proud that you don't make the mistakes that so many others do?
Instead, you get two -different- pages-pages that far less folk get to graduate on towards. So, feed my ego, and take my advice?
Yes, I'm feeling odd today.
The two pages are: . ?storyid1942775&chapter6(the first link is the more important one)
. ?storyid1942775&chapter4(something else that might help)