|Reviews for The Promotion|
| Alinzar chapter 29 . 3/27/2011
YAY! I see a happily ever after in the future... I love the jokes that you hid in this chapter (like the Kim Kardashian one) and the point you made at the end about "a little around the eyes."
This was a great chapter, I think that you did a great job portraying the complexity of the characters and emotions present in this chapter.
Please update soon!
| honey splattered brains chapter 29 . 3/20/2011
I have no idea why, but I was deliriously happy with her decision even though I hated Wesley. I think after the call Jenna had with Kim, I was just really satisfied with everything. Jenna should have done that a long time ago. xD But anyway, this is the first time I have ever chose one guy and changed my mind at the end. This is truly a unique story and I'm extremely glad I took the time to read it :D
| honey splattered brains chapter 26 . 3/20/2011
He's just pissing me off more and more.
| honey splattered brains chapter 24 . 3/20/2011
... RAGE! I fucking HATE Wesley. He can burn in hell for all I care. I just. LYING TO JENNA AGAIN? ): She doesn't deserve to be THAT KIND of wife. She deserves someone who is honest, loving and would 100% give himself to her JON. ): I hate Wesley. So, so, so, so much. There is no competition anymore. Jon wins.
| honey splattered brains chapter 22 . 3/19/2011
I am just so upset that there is only one woman out there for Wes: Kim. He will never EVER love anyone as much as he loves Kim and that is the way it will be until he dies. He will never love Jenna or any other girl for that matter, as much as he loves Kim and I don't think any woman should have to be in the position where she knows that the man she loves doesn't love her as much as she loves him. I think Wes is being really selfish and inconsiderate even if he's letting Jenna date him and Jon. Actually, when he said that, I couldn't BELIEVE him. Seriously! That's practically saying, I know I can beat Jon and you don't really care for him. You only care about me and I need you to be the mother of my children and you're a good person. I don't ACTUALLY love you but I just want a family so I don't care. ... I wish Jenna would just go out with Jon. I love Jon. D: He's HONEST. D:
| honey splattered brains chapter 19 . 3/19/2011
... oh my jesus
| honey splattered brains chapter 17 . 3/19/2011
YAY I love Jenna and I'm so happy she confronted him about it. I'm a bit miffed that he didn't try to stop her more though. It's like Jenna was right that Wesley only loved Kim and that shouldn't be right because now I don't know where the story is going. XD
| honey splattered brains chapter 15 . 3/19/2011
JON IS SO STUPID AND I HOPE THAT JENNA DOESN'T DO THAT. THAT IS HORRIBLE. ABSOLUTELY FUCKING HORRIBLE. JENNA SHOULD FUCKING DUMP WESLEY RIGHT FUCKING NOW. OH MY GOD I DON'T EVEN GIVE A SHIT ABOUT WESLEY'S MONEY. IF HE'S JUST USING HER AS A COVER UP FOR KIM AND HE DOESN'T EVEN CARE ABOUT JENNA FUCK HIM. FUCK HIM!
| honey splattered brains chapter 14 . 3/19/2011
OH MY GOD I CANT BELIEVE HE LIED TO HER ABOUT TALKING TO KIM D: I AM SAD. SO SAD.
| Jenna S chapter 29 . 3/18/2011
Dang, I’m super sad. I was really hoping she’d choose Jon. I loved this chapter. Very good story. The whole adoption thing rubs me the wrong way, but I guess if that’s the only part that does that, you’re doing a great job.
| Guest chapter 27 . 3/17/2011
I really love this story, but the whole adoption thing is just too messy. They’re not really in the right place to adopt children right now with all of the moving around and stuff.
| Kelly Rogala chapter 29 . 3/14/2011
Yea! Im happy she chose Wesley! Update soon!
| yakirra chapter 29 . 3/14/2011
"Hey, Kim, how the hell are ya?"
Best line ever. I couldn't stop laughing the whole time I read their conversation. I'm really glad that there was some Jenna - Kim action, I've been wanting for it.
Interesting with the whole Jon not telling Jenna his room number. I'm not sure if it's something that is going to play out in the future or not, but it's an event that I took not of nonetheless.
Looking forward to the next instalment and maybe some more humorous lines? Good stuff!
| Feeding Ground chapter 29 . 3/13/2011
I think I am going to take a leaf out of Jenna's conspiracy theorist book...
Jenna said that she did not want to know if Wesley and Kim had slept together, and yet I feel this is going to bite her in the ass. With Kim claiming to be pregnant again, one can assume that its Wesley's from the little NYE romp, BUT Wesley has claimed that he has always used protection (although it is know that protection isn't always 100% effective). And then with Jon going to Paris, even though it is known that he doesn't like Paris, which poses the question, 'has Jon been doing the dirty with Kim behind everyones back?'. A little far fetched, maybe yes, but possible.
All in all, I am over the moon that Jenna is with Wesley but know that something has to screw that up between now and the end of the story. :( I was so happy when Jenna bitched out Kim on the phone, but it has still left me feeling a little uneasy. When Kim starts to make appearances you know it will never end well... Can't someone just put her down already?
Thanks for the fabulously long chapter! As always I loved it and can't wait for the next chapter!
| xxcubanangelxx chapter 29 . 3/13/2011
Where art thou pancakes? :(
I know deep down Jon is extremely sad :(
But it isn't in his nature to go and be all sad so he keeps it in. :(
And he didn't even tell her the room number: he knew he wouldn't be picked :(
It sucks to resign one's self to being without who they want to be with... :(
I think Robin was kind of mean although it makes sense since its her brother... :(