|Reviews for The Promotion|
| torr chapter 4 . 1/23/2006
hey! great story! update soon!
| Bellababe chapter 4 . 1/23/2006
This story is going straight to my favorite box. Update ASAP
| WickedMe chapter 4 . 1/23/2006
Yay! You finally updated. LOL! How did Jenna become her boss's fiancee in the first place? And then he decides to tell her that right before she's supposed to meet everybody?
I really love the part where Wesley was speaking in French to his cousin, assuming that Jenna did not understand. Hmm...I wonder how he will react once he found out that she really does know the language. Can you say busted? LOL!
I really love your story and hope that you update it regularly!
| christine daae chapter 4 . 1/23/2006
I'm so glad she dumped trevor! But they think she's their fiance? *fiants* if any guy did that to me, I would think that would kinda be like proposing! *dies* oh well, LOVE the story! update soon!
| Cherise chapter 4 . 1/23/2006
Bwahaha! Way to drop a bombshell on someone! I can't believe he just mentioned that so casually! I love her boss, he's hilarious! And I especially can't wait to meet his family. But I know WHY he told her that. They didn't know he'd broke up with his slut of an ex yet, right? Haha. He sure butter'd her up...
| The Key of Destiny chapter 4 . 1/23/2006
So this is like a "boss falls in live with his secretary" story. I don't mind it, but I usually see that kind of stuff in movies. Though it's pretty good.
| First to Never Know chapter 4 . 1/23/2006
This story is so cute/funny. I love it. I wish my mom was like Marie. She sounds like so much fun. Please update soon.
| mary4angelus chapter 4 . 1/23/2006
Ooh, this story is getting very interesting...Cant wait to read Jenna's reaction to what Wesley just told her. By the way, great cliff hanger...Continue writing a lot more and no more writers block for soon!
| Vampgurl99 chapter 4 . 1/23/2006
I was really looking forward to this chapter when you said it would come out around New Years but, alas, it did not. How horrible! I was kind of dissapointed that it didn't come out at the time you said it would.
Anyways, this chapter was really good. Although, you did have a couple of errors but nothing major. (you wrote window instead of weekend when Jon was asking Jenna what she was going to do that weekend) I also liked how you added more depth to her mother when she tried to have George and her hook up. Definte quirkiness! Why did Jenna blurt out that her mom wanted to her hook her up with Wes? Don't you think, unless they were on the topic, it'd be really weird? What kind of outfits did Jenna get? I thought you would have added that scene in or if not, somehow bring up what she had bought. Did she get a new coat? What does Wesley's company do? If she doesn't know, then, well, that's kind of sketchy.
Man, what a bomb at the end of the chapter! How could he say that everyone thought Jenna was his fiancee? Will she have to wear a ring? Do they know that the ex has a different name? I can't wait to see his family and their quirkiness too! Anything else? I don't think so! Update soon!
PS Beat that writers block off!
PPS... When and how did Jenna's mom meat her step-dad?
| alineofprose chapter 3 . 1/20/2006
Wow. I love the plot, I love your writing. Nice touch with Grey Suit. Keep writing!
| nickyk89 chapter 3 . 1/20/2006
hahaha he totally desevered that! Please add more!
| caryn1150 chapter 3 . 1/8/2006
i really like it! cant wait till the next one!
| sam the bear chapter 1 . 12/20/2005
Aurgh! when are you going to update? i can't wait for much longer! please please please update!
| rehilaration chapter 3 . 11/29/2005
I love your story "The Promotion"! I hope you keep writing it! It's very promising!
| stanhops chapter 3 . 11/6/2005
Lovely tale, I must say...Mariano-is that from Jess of Gilmore girls. If so even more props for you! I really like where this is going and can't wait for the next chapter. It's probly equally wonderful to these chapters. Update soon