|Reviews for The Promotion|
| MelikaCalva chapter 30 . 7/27/2011
I think I am as confused as Jenna now.
I enjoy each chapter!
| There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand chapter 29 . 7/22/2011
i really love Jenna even though she seems confused most of the time,i think Jon is amazing mostly cus she isjust so funny and calm and fun AND he makes pancakes ;) but i think Wesley is slightly annoying but hey...no one's perfect!
iadore your story! ! ! ! ! ! !
please write more soon :D
love yo x
| witz13 chapter 29 . 7/18/2011
HI! Where did you go? Haven't seen more of this story! Growing desperate!
| Lucy1656 chapter 29 . 7/10/2011
Pretty please update soon! I love this story, one of the best I've read _
| star.coated.sneakers chapter 29 . 7/7/2011
"Where'd you go, I miss you so, seems like it's been forever since your been gone" that pretty much summarizes what I want to say. Please update soon :)
| aliaschantra chapter 28 . 7/5/2011
Just thought of something. It would be dramatic if Kim really is pregnant with Wes' offspring and Jenna would get pregnant with Wes' too. Seeing that Wes is no longer tied with the no physical-contact rule and is starting to get affectionate and Jenna chose him, it's not impossible that something could happen with their last day together in Ukraine. Wes would be put in an unbelievably dire situation. Though in this situation, if I were Jenna, I'd never even consider accepting Wes. Hehe.
| aliaschantra chapter 29 . 7/4/2011
I started reading this a couple of days ago and I've just finished it. It's engrossing. I find myself shifting loyalties from time to time. :)
You're a very persuasive writer that address realistic issues and provide logical points that it is hard to stick to a specific opinion. You're very thorough and present almost every side of an argument. I love your sense of humor; it shows in the dialogues. Each character has a distinct personality that is consistent enough so the reader could deduce a reasonable explanation for the character's actions or words.
The core question(in my mind) almost every end of the chapter is whether Jenna should choose Wesley or Jon. Before she chose Wesley, I would have been still happy with either. Jon is a darling and in the latest chapter, I think Jenna and Wesley underestimated the degree of Jon's feelings for her and I'm not sure Jon realized it himself or maybe he did and he's just downplaying it because of the circumstance or maybe I'm just wrong. I like him simply because his heart is not taken. Hehe. It’s hard to compete for a person’s heart but it’s harder to compete with that person’s heart. Jon is honest, a rare trait. He's a good guy but ultimately, it's not about who is the better person because they both are, even with their flaws. Wesley is inherently good even with his Kim issues and when he eventually overcame that hurdle he moved up to the top of my list. But is he really done with Kim? (Doubt is the consequence of lying, I can't fully trust him because trust takes time to earn once broken.) If he is, then he'll remain in my top list, if not, then he'll be written off forever.*laughs* It does seem like he really is over Kim because of Anya(and his desire for a family and his morals) and although it would have been more romantic for him to end his relations solely because of Jenna, I know that it would take time. Unless he'll fall in love with Jenna though, I would always be doubtful whether he could sustain his promise to keep away from Kim- it does seem like he could based on the latest development. Unlike Jenna, I'm not so forgiving and choose Wesley with the same rationale as hers. I'd only choose Wesley for love(ideally), nothing more, nothing less. Jenna is not in love with either so it is hardly a factor in her decision. What is love anyway? It is hardly definable and differs from person to person. In the real world, realistically speaking, most people think more like Jenna— choosing based on what aligns to their main concern. Her reasons are consistent with her nature. Her primary priority is no longer herself but Anya, and there lies the advantage of Wesley because their goals and dreams for the future collide. Jon, for all his greatness, doesn’t have the luxury of time to develop his feelings enough for him to commit himself fully for Jenna’s security of mind. Wesley has committed himself to be a good father, to be a good husband and it would be perfect if he could commit his heart.
Update soon please. Thanks. :)
| buznuz1 chapter 29 . 6/11/2011
I can't tell if there is going to be another complication or if we have finally gotten to the easy road :S Im LOVING this so far and I can't wait till you update so please do!
| buznuz1 chapter 25 . 6/11/2011
Hi, I am absoloutely loving this story and I read your PM and I just wanted to say I TOTALLY agree with you, it is your story and they shouldn't try and pressure you into changing it for their sakes. Please continue! btw I was a bit thrown off by the Wesely/Kim scene and I'm still up in the air about how to feel about that as I'm now not sure if any of them suit eachother. They all have flaws (as real human beings should have) but they just don't seem to suit eachother anymore. They're all unhappy and compromising more than any one should have to in a normal functioning relationship. Love this story! please continue!
| reindrops chapter 29 . 6/7/2011
And I can finally say that 'everything is beautiful and nothing hurts.' I'll just hope that nothing will come in their way this time.
| reindrops chapter 28 . 6/7/2011
Now I'm confused. Oh well. I also started reading The Hunger Games trilogy, and right now, I'm still stuck on Catching Fire. I really like Peeta, but I can't help but love Gale too. Haha!
| reindrops chapter 26 . 6/7/2011
I just realized that I've been giving short reviews for the previous chapters. :D Anyways, I don't know what to say. It sucks being in Jenna's position- overhearing your sort-of-boyfriend talk to the ex. Again. But I'm glad she's finally known because I really wanted to punch Wesley in the face. Lol. I hope that this is for real this time. No more Kim. God, why can't he ever let go of that woman? Since Jenna now knows that Wesley has lied again, I suppose that means it's the end of their relationship.. if you could still call that a relationship. Of course, I'm still hoping that he would win her over and be more sincere and loyal and honest to her because that's really important.
| reindrops chapter 25 . 6/7/2011
The entire time I was reading this, I can't get my mind off Wesley's lies. I like Jon. He's completely honest, but there is still a part of me hoping that Wesley would realize Jenna's worth. Jenna's right though. Wesley is so secretive and shady.
| reindrops chapter 24 . 6/7/2011
Shit. (more expletives) Ugh. And here I am thinking that Wesley is now being honest and sincere. Why is he going back to Kim when she's such a bitch? I can't believe Wesley is that stupid. (Or maybe I'm not really in the position (lol) to judge since I've never been in love as well.) But hey, I prefered Wesley more than Jon before this chapter and now, I just don't know anymore.
| reindrops chapter 21 . 6/6/2011
Uh oh. I know they didn't do anything bad and it was just a little lie, but gosh, what would Wesley think if he ever finds out? And Jon seems to have an attraction to Jenna.