Reviews for The Promotion
Angie chapter 30 . 2/11/2013
Please finish this! I really want to know how this ends and I absolutely hate cliffhangers.
I really like this book, could do without the cussing, but other than that it is great. I can not wait to see how this ends
silver.trees chapter 30 . 2/1/2013
hi sam.

missed this story so decided to revisit it and re-read some chapters. i've come to the conclusion that wesley is a lot more untrustworthy then i initially thought. in fact i'd consider him a bit of a deceptive liar who's sabotaging jon's chances if my suspicions are correct. the issue about jon's room number has me believing that wesley had made some kind of arrangement with jon about jenna's decision that wesley didn't share with her so i'm suspecting her decision to pick wesley wasn't entirely an informed one. but then i ask myself why he'd go to such lengths against his cousin? maybe wesley somehow sees his behaviour as justified because of what it'd mean to him to have a family with anya? speaking of her i think there was a bit where anya wanted to be taken to either jon or wesley and it wasn't clear which - i'm wondering if that's some foreshadowing or maybe i'm just reading too much into that. one thing i'm sure about, jon's her best option. you can really see how his feelings for her have developed and how much he connects with her. plus, didn't he see jenna first?

i think jon's reluctant investing himself and his feelings fully into the relationship with jenna because perhaps he's afraid that despite his best efforts, she'd still pick wesley over him? i think wesley's taking advantage of that and presenting it to jenna that jon doesn't care or she's simply a passing fancy although that couldn't be further from the truth i believe. now the question is: does wesley know of how deep jon's feelings run for jenna or is he simply going on jon's previous behaviour and personality i wonder. i kinda wish jon would just spill wesley's secrets already but i guess it's not in his character or maybe he wishes for jenna to discover the truth herself? jon

anyhow, i really love that this story has got me thinking of so much. that's a testament to a great author. i'm feeling so involved. i do hope you get to finish because it's so close to being over and it's all so good.
The.Sweetly.Insane.Dorky.Ninja chapter 30 . 1/11/2013
Hello! I just need to say, i am literally begging you to update this story. Please. I've stayed up all night for the past nights, reading this stpry because i am so addicted to it. Your writing skills amaze me, and I can really feel the confusion in Jenna's head. But, i think Jenna seems quite...assuming. Once she hears something she doesn't like, she ignores it and draws her own conclusion. I don't know whether i am on team Jon or team Wesley, but i love the passion she has with Jon. The part of why she wants to stay with Wesley, is evidently because of her responsibility. I really love this story. Please stop being a frog and update. :)

daisyxduck chapter 30 . 1/8/2013
Hi, I realise it's been over a since you last updated but i was wondering if you intended to finish this story, I've only just stumbled across it and found it enjoyable.
AnonymousReads chapter 30 . 12/28/2012
Hey you said it yourself the story is almost over please finish it. I hats when people start a story but do not finish it. I always end up wondering what would have happened next and never knowing which sucks for me. Update soon. Please. :)
sunny301 chapter 30 . 12/10/2012
PLEASE update I NEED to know what's going on with Jon. You're killing me here!
Sunny chapter 5 . 12/6/2012
I am really enjoying the story. I sincerely thank whoever is editing or (beta-ing?). Most of all I enjoy the chemistry between Jenna and Wesley and the fluidity of their conversations.
Mahteslover chapter 30 . 10/17/2012
I beg you to please update this story it is amazing ... I want to finish reading it please put more up soon ...
BebeEllis chapter 30 . 10/10/2012
. . I'm begging you, please update. I'm procrastinated essays reading up to this point only to find out I'll be too preoccupied thinking about Jenna's situation to actually concentrate on writing. . All this to and fro, is getting to be a bit much. Really hope that everything works out soon.
crazy4luv chapter 30 . 9/21/2012
Are you going to finish this story? There's nothing I hate more than investing all of this time in a story and then having the author NOT finish it. I really enjoy your writing. Hopefully this one gets tied up for me.
Sin-and-Smokin chapter 30 . 8/31/2012
Wow this story is gooood- and it proves just how good of a writer you are. I mean I'm confused along with Jenna and I'm pretty much feeling everything she's feeling- a writer that can make her readers relate that is retry darn awesome
Update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish this, or post the next chapter! (: I've was caught up since '09 and having been waiting excruciatingly patiently for 2 years! This story is by far one of the most amazing i have ever read! It keeps me super hooked, I've probably reread more than 20 times. I'm serious! I love this so much! can't wait for the next upload! 3
Guest chapter 30 . 7/1/2012
This story is so good! Please finish? :)
emmeline campbell chapter 30 . 5/28/2012
I don't usually leave reviews because I can never think of anything constructive to add :p but I decided some encouragement wouldn't be wasted :) I love this story and all the characters (except Kim ;)) so do please continue and know I am a reader who will stop reading if I don't like the story, and since I've got this far you can be sure this is a good one :) I usually balk at bad grammar so you're safe :p xxx keep writing, you have talent! X
hollywood920 chapter 30 . 5/28/2012
Okay I know this is headed towards Team Wesley and I'm kind of disappointed about it for a few reasons. I actually started out completely on Team Wesley but at some point in the story I changed to Team Jon. I kind of agree with Marie. Jon likes Jenna for who she is, he challenges her, he brings out life in her. Wesley likes the fact that Jenna would be a good mother. He keeps saying that he could grow to love her, but he shouldn't be planning their marriage and their family together if he doesn't actually love her for who she is.

I know she wants to be a mother and the

thing is she still can be a mother with Jon.

Love shouldn't be what makes you feel comfortable, love should make you feel alive. She shouldn't sacrifice her love life for being secure.

Well that's just my opinion about everything. I do think you're a good writer and I hope you continue the story.
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