|Reviews for A Pelusian Diary|
| Maxwell K chapter 1 . 7/8/2005
Awesome! forget the thing about the watchmen book i accidently thought i was writing in aim for a second lol but good story
| jeek chapter 1 . 6/22/2005
this is good. i like how in every one of your stories its so descriptive, like im actually there. i like this, continue. its good.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
I was quite entranced by the dialogue and description. The writing has a sexy quality to it which is quite refreshing to read. Matches the tone accurately. Just check for a few mistakes grammar-wise. Otherwise really nice!